The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The given maps illustrate changes
of
an industrial Change preposition
in
area
in the town known as Norbiton between current
and planned future development of the site.
Correct article usage
the current
Overall
, there are various changes could
be observed in the blueprint with the expansion of residential Correct pronoun usage
that could
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
along with
facilities distributed around the town.
To begin
with, this
area
is mainly purpose for industrial site
which consisted of numerous factories that Fix the agreement mistake
sites
lied
around the circular path at the Replace the word
lay
center
of the map and both Change the spelling
centre
side
of the eastern wings. In the north, there is a large Fix the agreement mistake
sides
area
for
Change preposition
of
the
farmland beyond the river, Correct article usage
apply
whereas
in the southern part was the connect
with the main road.
In regards Replace the word
connection
with
, the future developments of the city Change preposition
to
aiming
to convert Wrong verb form
aim
this
industrial area
into a residential zone seeing that the factories are replacing with houses instead
. There will be new constructions and renovation happened
. In terms of new constructions, new paths Wrong verb form
happening
had
created toward the north crossing the river Verb problem
were
as
to connect Correct word choice
apply
this
two Correct determiner usage
these
seperated
Correct your spelling
separated
separate
area
for housing and the farmland Fix the agreement mistake
areas
then
moved to the side nearby. Another, towards the northwest, houses around the corner with the Shops below with the medical centre on the opposite. Moving on to the East wings, School
will be built Correct article usage
the School
at the end
of the path and a play ground
in the middle of Correct your spelling
playground
residential
Add an article
the residential
a residential
area
can be clearly seen.Submitted by kamonluck1999 on
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