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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.
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The given map illustrates the development of Chorleywood
village
 near London
in
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 1868 to 1994.
Overall
, it can be seen that
this
village
 already had main roads in the first period given, and followed by
another
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other
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 transportation ways alongside the residential housing surrounded by the roads
thoroughout
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throughout
 the year studied.
To begin
 with, there are three different pathways
has
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 been built throughout the period mentioned. The main roads
was
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 already established in 1868 and mainly served the north and west side of the
village
. Followed by
motorway
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the motorway
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 creation in 1979 which existed from south to north
in
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on
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 the east side of the town.
Lastly
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 a railway was installed in 1909 to add more varied means of transportation from west to east in the south
area
 of the
village
. Regarding to residential
area
 in Chorleywood, there is a gradual increase in population.
Innitially
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Initially
,
in
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from
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 1868 to 1883 a small housing
area
 only
occurred
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 in the
center
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 of the
village
 which
is
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was
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 located near
to
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apply
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the main road to facilitate the residents
for
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commuting. Moving
to
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from
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 1883 to 1922 where houses
was
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were
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 built more than twice
than
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that
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 it was and situated on the south of the prior housing
area
.
Moreover
,
along with
 the development of
motorway
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motorways
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 and
railway
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railways
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, the population has increased rapidly spreading mainly on the east side of the
area
 studied,
and
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apply
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all of which
positioned
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were positioned
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 right by the various
type
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types
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 of transportation ways from 1922 to 1994.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Steadily
  • Pivotal events
  • Significant change
  • Transportation links
  • Commuter village
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Public facilities
  • Infrastructure
  • Environmental impact
  • Community life
  • Conservation efforts
  • Maintaining character
  • Vicinity
  • Unique aspects
  • Common challenges
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