Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.
The given map illustrates the development of Chorleywood
village
near London in
1868 to 1994. Change preposition
from
Overall
, it can be seen that this
village
already had main roads in the first period given, and followed by another
transportation ways alongside the residential housing surrounded by the roads Correct quantifier usage
other
thoroughout
the year studied.
Correct your spelling
throughout
To begin
with, there are three different pathways has
been built throughout the period mentioned. The main roads Wrong verb form
that have
was
already established in 1868 and mainly served the north and west side of the Change the verb form
were
village
. Followed by motorway
creation in 1979 which existed from south to north Correct article usage
the motorway
in
the east side of the town. Change preposition
on
Lastly
a railway was installed in 1909 to add more varied means of transportation from west to east in the south Add a comma
Lastly,
area
of the village
.
Regarding to residential area
in Chorleywood, there is a gradual increase in population. Innitially
, Correct your spelling
Initially
in
1868 to 1883 a small housing Change preposition
from
area
only occurred
in the Verb problem
existed
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
village
which is
located near Wrong verb form
was
to
the main road to facilitate the residents Change preposition
apply
for
commuting. Moving Change preposition
apply
to
1883 to 1922 where houses Change preposition
from
was
built more than twice Change the verb form
were
than
it was and situated on the south of the prior housing Correct word choice
that
area
. Moreover
, along with
the development of motorway
and Fix the agreement mistake
motorways
railway
, the population has increased rapidly spreading mainly on the east side of the Fix the agreement mistake
railways
area
studied, and
all of which Correct word choice
apply
positioned
right by the various Add a missing verb
were positioned
type
of transportation ways from 1922 to 1994.Fix the agreement mistake
types
Submitted by Practicexoxo
on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, area with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼