The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps show the developments which

occured

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occurred

at the seaside resort of Templeton

bettween

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between

1990 and 2005. It is

apparantly

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apparently

seen that there were significant changes including recreational facilities and accommodations. In 1990, the city was

residential

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a residential

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area with a large number of trees, but during the next 15

years

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years,

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the resort witnessed dramatic changes. The most

noticible

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noticeable

is that

overwhelming

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the overwhelming

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majority of trees were cut down, with all the houses along the sea being demolished and replaced by flats.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, a new industry

such

as a factory sprang out next to the sea

along with

supermarket

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a supermarket

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, and an airport was built near the school. Only a few trees west of the river remained. The houses in the northwest of

seaside

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the seaside

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were knocked down and new buildings were constructed. In the middle of the resort green space was demolished and four houses were made as well.

Further

developments were the

constructions

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construction

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of a new railway alongside the sea and a new ferry

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the east of

railway

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the railway

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