The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show the developments which
occured
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occurred
at the seaside resort of Templeton
bettween
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between
1990 and 2005. It is
apparantly
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apparently
seen that there were significant changes including recreational facilities and accommodations. In 1990, the city was
residential
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a residential
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area with a large number of trees, but during the next 15
years
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the resort witnessed dramatic changes. The most
noticible
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noticeable
is that
overwhelming
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majority of trees were cut down, with all the houses along the sea being demolished and replaced by flats.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
, a new industry
such
as a factory sprang out next to the sea
along with
supermarket
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a supermarket
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, and an airport was built near the school. Only a few trees west of the river remained. The houses in the northwest of
seaside
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the seaside
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were knocked down and new buildings were constructed. In the middle of the resort green space was demolished and four houses were made as well.
Further
developments were the
constructions
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construction
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of a new railway alongside the sea and a new ferry
in
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the east of
railway
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the railway
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.
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