The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show the developments which
occured
at the seaside resort of Templeton Correct your spelling
occurred
bettween
1990 and 2005.
It is Correct your spelling
between
apparantly
seen that there were significant changes including recreational facilities and accommodations.
In 1990, the city was Correct your spelling
apparently
residential
area with a large number of trees, but during the next 15 Add an article
a residential
years
the resort witnessed dramatic changes. The most Add a comma
years,
noticible
is that Correct your spelling
noticeable
overwhelming
majority of trees were cut down, with all the houses along the sea being demolished and replaced by flats. Correct article usage
the overwhelming
Futhermore
, a new industry Correct your spelling
Furthermore
such
as a factory sprang out next to the sea along with
supermarket
, and an airport was built near the school.
Only a few trees west of the river remained. The houses in the northwest of Add an article
a supermarket
seaside
were knocked down and new buildings were constructed. In the middle of the resort green space was demolished and four houses were made as well. Add an article
the seaside
Further
developments were the constructions
of a new railway alongside the sea and a new ferry Fix the agreement mistake
construction
in
the east of Change preposition
to
railway
.Add an article
the railway
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