The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart the majority of globetrotters liked the National
Gallery
and the
British
Museum
was the second choice.
Whereas
travellers showed less interest in the
Victoria
and
Albert
Museum
in these years. It is conspicuous that the interest shown by the explorers 13
million
, who watched the
Victoria
Albert
Museum
and the
British
Museum
were in second spot people visited 12
million
, where the National
Gallery
was less choice among all backpackers in 2007. The number of tourists who visited was the same in 2008 with a dramatic reduction took place to travel to the
British
Museum
6
million
, only the National
Gallery
maintained a slight upward trend in 2009 touched 7
million
. Probing ahead, from 2010, tourists visiting the National
Gallery
soared from 11
million
to 16
million
in 2012, which was the highest among all the museums. The
British
Museum
attracted the globetrotters that were 7
million
in 2010 and after that, it abruptly hit 16
million
in 2012.
Furthermore
, the
Victoria
and
Albert
Museum
recovered after declining in 2010 and touched 10
million
in 2012. The
Victoria
and
Albert
Museum
also
brought revenue for the London Authorities and only
Victoria
attracted less as compared to others.
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