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The map below is of the town of canterbury. A new school (s) is planned for the area. the map shows two possible sites for the school. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of the town of canterbury. A new school (s) is planned for the area. the map shows two possible sites for the school. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map given illustrates a new school
planning
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 in Canterbury
town
, there are two areas that
suitable
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are suitable
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 for
this
 proposal, namely S1 and S2.
Overall
, it can be seen that both of the proposed areas are
surrouded
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surrounded
 by countryside. The first site is located in
rural
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a rural
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area
 compared to the second one situated in the centre of the
town
.
To begin
 with, it is obvious that the first proposed site is positioned on the east of the
town
that
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just 5 km
to
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from
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 Sturry
town
. Despite
of
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the fact that it is sited
on
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in
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 the countryside,
this
area
 has
many
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access to various facilities, namely
university
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the university
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, housing
area
, and the
town
 centre which
make
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makes
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 it strategic. Moving to the second proposed site, it is obvious that
this
area
 is located in the
town
 centre, which allows the residents to gain
many
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access to different means of facilities there.
Moreover
, it has direct access to Chartham
town
 which
calculated
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is
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 only 7 km from Canterbury.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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