The graph below gives information about the percentages of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The provided line chart depicts the percentages of people living in cities, it includes four
asian
countries, including Phillippines, Change the capitalization
Asian
Malaysia
, Thailand and Indonesia. The timeframe of the graph itself ranging
between 1970 and 2020, with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040.
At a glance Wrong verb form
ranges
of
the graph, the highest number of population that live in cities Change preposition
at
at the end
of the timeframe are Malaysia
, Indonesia, Thailand, and Phillippines, with the
approximate value of 80, 60, 57, and 48 Correct article usage
apply
percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
Malaysia
's trend are
pretty stable from 1970 to 2040, with some surge after 2000 reaching around 60 percent. Change the verb form
is
Furthermore
, Malaysia
's trend
are quite similar to Fix the agreement mistake
trends
Indonesia
. In 2000, the number of people skyrocketed and Change noun form
Indonesia's
surpass
the other two countries, with almost 40 Wrong verb form
surpassed
percent
of people Change the spelling
per cent
live
in the metropolis. Thailand Wrong verb form
living
an
Correct your spelling
and
Correct article usage
the Phillipines
Phillipines
have almost identical Correct your spelling
Philippines
pattern
, Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
by
surging Change preposition
apply
Change preposition
in number
number
until 2000, and slowly Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
decrease
until 2010. Both Wrong verb form
decreasing
also
having
an uptrend until 2040.Wrong verb form
have
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