These days debate over the implications of the high
salary
has sparked considerable controversy Use synonyms
to
around the world. Change preposition
apply
However
, some believe that Linking Words
received
Celebrities should Verb problem
apply
be
Verb problem
receive
a high salaries
from the ministry Correct the article-noun agreement
a high salary
high salaries
while
others say that professionals should Linking Words
be gotten
more remunerations. Wrong verb form
receive
This
essay will discuss both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.
On the one hand, the authorities should give more Linking Words
Use synonyms
salary
to Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
the
renowned Correct article usage
apply
persons
because they are Use synonyms
being contributed
enormous amounts to the nations through their talents and Wrong verb form
contributing
skill
. Fix the agreement mistake
skills
This
meansLinking Words
,
the ruling party should Remove the comma
apply
appriciate
them by Providing high Salaries to them Correct your spelling
appreciate
along with
Linking Words
honoured
them. Taking India, Verb problem
honouring
for example
, Sports Linking Words
Persons
to be considered famous Use synonyms
people
, when they win any Use synonyms
competitions
Fix the agreement mistake
competition
while
Linking Words
prime
minister of India, Congrede Correct article usage
the prime
congrates
to all players by providing more money for encouragement. Correct your spelling
congrats
Weedless
to say, famous Correct your spelling
Needless
people
should Use synonyms
be received
high remuneration from the authorities Wrong verb form
receive
due to
they Linking Words
honoured
our nations Wrong verb form
honour
to
around the world.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, professionals Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
teachers
. and doctors should Use synonyms
be received
more Wrong verb form
receive
salary
from the government because they Use synonyms
d
dedicate their entire lives for the population's sake. Verb problem
apply
This
meansLinking Words
,
medical Remove the comma
apply
Practioners
are Correct your spelling
Practitioners
being saved
Wrong verb form
saving
Reople's
lives from diseases, Correct your spelling
people's
likewise
, Linking Words
teachers
teach students to improve Use synonyms
nation's
status Correct article usage
the nation's
to
around the world. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, doctors and Linking Words
teachers
both are treated Use synonyms
look
like Verb problem
apply
god
because of there two Fix the agreement mistake
gods
people
have more knowledge, and they use Use synonyms
for
Correct pronoun usage
it for
people
's sake only. Use synonyms
Then
, there are deserve to Linking Words
be gotten
more Wrong verb form
get
salary
from the ruling party.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
Although
renowned Linking Words
persons
should Use synonyms
be received
high remuneration from the government On the grounds they contribute tremendously to the nation by skills and talents, Professionals are Wrong verb form
receive
scarificed
to their entire Correct your spelling
sacrificed
liver
for Fix the agreement mistake
lives
serve to
the nation. Wrong verb form
serving
Eventhough
, in my opinion, about Correct your spelling
Even though
this
, Linking Words
teachers
and doctors should be we Use synonyms
received
Wrong verb form
receive
by
high Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
salary
because they are the only Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
Use synonyms
persons
to sacrifice Replace the word
people
to
others, Change preposition
for
so
the Correct word choice
apply
Sovernment
should be given more money to them.Correct your spelling
government
reanudeepan