The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Task 1
The line graph illustrates the
number
of closed Use synonyms
shops
and opened new Use synonyms
shops
in the period between 2011 to 2018. There were ups and downs in the Use synonyms
number
of closed and newly opened Use synonyms
shops
in the period from 2011 to 2018.
In 2011, the Use synonyms
number
of newly opened Use synonyms
shops
was clearly higher than the Use synonyms
number
of closed Use synonyms
shops
with 8,500 new Use synonyms
shops
opened in 2011. The Use synonyms
number
of newly opened Use synonyms
shops
noticed a huge Use synonyms
drop
in 2012, going down to 4000. There was a steady rise in the Use synonyms
number
of newly opened Use synonyms
shops
between 2012 to 2014. The Use synonyms
number
of newly opened Use synonyms
shops
had another less significant Use synonyms
drop
In 2015. After that, the Use synonyms
number
of newly opened Use synonyms
shops
remained steady till 2017, before noticing a slight Use synonyms
drop
in 2018.
In 2011, The Use synonyms
number
of closed Use synonyms
shops
was around 6,500. Use synonyms
Then
, it noticed a slight Linking Words
drop
in 2012, before rising again in 2013 to reach its highest time in Use synonyms
this
period with slightly above 7,000 closed Linking Words
shops
. In the following years, the Use synonyms
number
of closed Use synonyms
shops
declined to reach its lowest time in 2015 with slightly less than 1,000 Use synonyms
shops
. The following year noticed a significant rise, before staying steady for 2 years from 2016 to 2018.
In Conclusion, the Use synonyms
number
of newly opened Use synonyms
shops
was the highest in 2011, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of closed Use synonyms
shops
was the highest in 2013. The lowest Use synonyms
number
of closed Use synonyms
shops
was in 2015, Use synonyms
while
the smallest Linking Words
number
of newly opened Use synonyms
shops
was in 2018.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops, drop with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 14 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 4 times.
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