MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph illustrates
students
from Indonesia, Hong
Kong
, Malaysia and Singapore
living in Australia
.
Overall
, the number
of students
living in Australia
increased over the years. The highest number
of student residences are from Indonesia. Even though most Malaysian students
were living in the beginning, it ended up being the country which has the least number
of students
in Australia
.
Hong
Kong
, Indonesia and Singapore
had almost equal numbers of resident students
nearly 1000 in 1982. Hong
Kong
and Singapore
maintained the same number
until the year 1987. Thereafter
, Hong
Kong
's number
rapidly increased surpassing the number
of Indonesian students
and reaching up to ten thousand students
in 1992. Meanwhile, the number
of students
from Singapore
gradually increased to end up
near twenty-thousand and mark the second-highest Verb problem
apply
number
of students
in Australia
.
Indonesian students
,
steadily rose up until 1994 and got rapidly increased by 1998. Remove the comma
apply
Thereafter
it got reduced in number
to end up just above twenty-thousand students
.Submitted by lithmakumaradasa on
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