The charts below give information about different types of waste disposal of in one country in 1960 and 2011. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about different types of waste disposal of in one country in 1960 and 2011. 

Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts illustrate the changes in
misuse
disposal methods within a single country between 1960 and 2011.
Overall
, there was a notable decline in the percentages of paper, textiles, and food
misuse
over the two periods.
Additionally
, certain types of
misuse
,
such
as green
waste
, glass, and metal, remained relatively stable. In 1960, paper disposal accounted for 25% of the total
waste
, but
this
figure declined by 10 proportion points to 15% in 2011.
Textiles
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waste
disposal, which comprised 17% of the total in 1960, decreased by 6 percentage points to 11% in 2011.
Conversely
, other types of
waste
disposal experienced a threefold decrease, dropping from 12% to 4%. Interestingly, there was an increase in the
percent
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of food and plastic
misuse
. Food
waste
,
initially
at 12% in 1960, rose to 21% by 2011,
while
plastic
waste
increased from 18% to 22% over the same period.
Additionally
, wood
waste
doubled from 4% to 8%. The proportions of green
waste
and glass disposal remained unchanged at 9% and 5%, respectively. Metal
waste
was the only category to see a slight increase, rising by 1 percentage point from 8% to 9%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally".
Vocabulary: Replace the words misuse, waste with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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