The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of tourists visiting a Caribbean island
between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, it can be seen that although
the total number
of visitors
staying on cruise
Add an article
a cruise
the cruise
ship
and on Fix the agreement mistake
ships
island
fluctuated Correct article usage
the island
in
several times, the Change preposition
apply
figures
for total people
soared significantly at the end
of 7-year
period.
At the Add an article
the 7-year
a 7-year
begining
, Correct your spelling
beginning
in
2010, Change preposition
of
while
roughly 250000 people
stayed on cruise
ships, approximately 750000 people
preferred to stay on island
. Over the next three years, the Add an article
the island
figures
for people
stayed
on Wrong verb form
staying
ship
and on Add an article
the ship
island
doubled and reached Correct article usage
the island
to
500000 and 1.5 Change preposition
apply
million
visitors
, respectively. Consequently
, the total number
of tourists reached 2 million
people
in 2013.
Over the next 2 years
period (from 2013 to 2015), as the Correct your spelling
2-year
number
of visitors
staying on cruise
ships increased dramatically to over a million
people
, the figures
for travelers stayed
on Wrong verb form
staying
island
remained constant, at 1.5 Add an article
the island
million
visitors
. However
, the total number
of visitors
exceeded 2.5 million
people
. After 2015, even though the figures
for both was
changeable Correct subject-verb agreement
were
nonetheless
the total number
of visitors
remained stable. Finally
, in 2017, 3.5 million
of
Change preposition
apply
people
visited this
specific Caribbean island
and 2 million
of these chose to stay on cruise
ships and others preferred to island
.Correct article usage
the island
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, visitors, cruise, figures, people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 5 times.
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