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The chart below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The chart below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The line charts
illustrates
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proportions
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the proportions
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 of
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households
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house holds
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households
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owning
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 washing machines, refrigerators and vacuum
cleanners
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cleaners
while
 the
time
 they used for
house work
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housework
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during
duringg
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during
 the
time
 period from 1920 to 2019 As can be clearly seen from the graph, the total spending
of
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 utensils witnessed a
trong
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strong
 surge, the opposite was true for the
time
 quantity.
In addition
, refrigerators and
acuum
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vacuum
 gained substantial popularity. As the graph
show
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, in 1920, very few households in
this
 country had refrigerators, with the figure standing at about 0%. The amount of
fridge
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fridges
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 peaked dramatically at 100% by 1980 and remained stable until 2019.
Similarly
, the figure for vacuum
cleanners
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cleaners
 started at 30% and reached a peak of 100% in 2000. The number of
then
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them
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 levelled off by 2019.
In contrast
, the percentage of households with washing machines increased slightly between 1920 and 1960 from 40% to 70%. During a period of 20 years, dipping by around 5% and hit a
peaked
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 of 70% in 2019. As regards the second graph, the amount of
time
 spent on housework including washing clothes, preparing meals and
cleanning
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cleaning
 started at 50 hours in 1920. The figure
then
 fell sharply to 20 hours 40 years later. After 1960, it went down slowly, accounting for nearly 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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