The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart indicates the
coffee
and tea purchasing and consuming habits of Australian citizens in five cities
during the last
4 weeks.
Overall
, it is apparent that the majority of Australians were really into going to café to buy coffee
and tea, which accounted for 57% of the total figure on average, followed by the habits of buying instant
coffee
and fresh ones respectively. Except for Adelaine where the data of instant
coffee
consumers was leading.
On one hand, Melbourne and Hobart were two cities
that had the largest proportion of people wanting to buy coffee
and tea at café, which was 64% in both cities
. While
on the other hand
, Adelaine tended to have the smallest percentage, which was only 49%. In case
of the habit of buying Correct article usage
the case
instant
coffee
, Hobart still had the dominating position. To be more specific, there was 54% of Hobart’s clients had the habit of consuming packaged coffee
in this
period. While
Hobart was dominating in this
category last
month, Sydney was at the bottom of this
group, where the data of instant
coffee
consumers was only 45%. However
, Sydney had the highest percentage of those who were keen on fresh coffee
, which was 43% in the last
4 weeks. At the same time, the proportion of fresh coffee
clients in Brisbane accounted for only 34%, which was the lowest among five
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the five
cities
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