In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. You should write at least 250 words.

In several countries,

university

students

live with their families

during

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while

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they pursue their

degree

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degrees

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,

while

some

students

in other nations prefer to study in another city.

This

essay will examine the

advantages

and disadvantages of living away from home when they study at

university

. There are several

advantages

of living away from their family home. One benefit is self-control. Those

students

have

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learnt how to control themselves

due to

something are over-underrated.

For example

, it is general that in the

university

,

students

will have some

arguements

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arguments

with their peers so self-control is

predominant

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key to

address

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addressing

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solution

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because they can not call

to

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their parents to solve that problem. Financial management

also

count

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as

benefit

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a benefit

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, when

people

leave

from

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apply

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their

family

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families

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, they

were spent

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spend

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all things by themselves.

Thus

, they figure out to learn to how to control their monthly income to spend on all bills including rental, utility,

and

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food, etc.

In

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this

reason,

people

tend to manage their expenses wisely. Despite these

advantages

of staying

from

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family, there are a few disadvantages as well. Some

people

will have mental health issues.

For instance

, international

students

migrant

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migrate

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from their home countries to

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their higher education but they get

a

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apply

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discrimination from other folks in the class

like

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of

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skin

color

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colour

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, accent as a clear

exmple

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example

so they will get

lose

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immidiately

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immediately

. Unfortunately, some of them reach

to

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mental health

problem

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problems

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.

Furthermore

, loneliness, a majority of

international

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internationals

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have

met

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experienced

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this

situation

in

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for

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some reason,

for example

, when they get sick, nobody

look

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looks

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after them which is the reason lead to have

a

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apply

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loneliness condition. In conclusion, I

strong

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strongly

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believe that

advantages

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the advantages

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of living out from family during

university

study

outweight

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outweigh

the

disadvatage

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disadvantage

disadvantages

.

People

will build their self-control to be stronger, and manage

finance

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finances

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wisely,

however

, there are some disadvantages

such

as mental health issues, and loneliness condition.