It is a heated argument around the world whether culprits stay behind
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, Some believe that criminals should be jailed,
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prison,
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others say that there are more ways to handle them.
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and I strongly agree with the latter opinion.
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should sent to imprisonment because prison is a rehabilitation
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of they have a chance to rectify their mistakes.
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what they did in jail,
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frequently.
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to prison, normal people might live peaceful lives without inmates
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to individuals. Needless to say, culprits should be jailed, and they should realise what they did.
, there are some effective ways to handle
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, namely counselling, social
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and fines;
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are considered
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what crime they committed.
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nations
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freely in order
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the government will finish their work free of cost workforce.
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not need to
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, they should pay some fine to the ruling party, and
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cost of
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amount they cannot
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any mistakes their whole life.
, there are
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constructive methods of
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that
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illegal activities.
In conclusion,
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criminals have a chance to realise their mistakes, punishments of fines and
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can be effective strategies
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reducing crimes.
, from my perspective, providing
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and fines are the constructive methods of
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