you stayed at your friend home when you attending a conference in austriala. Unforunately, you left a large envelopewith some important documents in your room.write a letter to your friend .IN letter. . thank you friend for you stay .decribe where you left the envelope .ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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Dear Aman, I hope
your
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are doing well.I am
writting
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writing
this
letter to
thanks
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you for the warm welcome of me , and
hospitality
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the hospitality
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provided
by
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you . The
foodcooked
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food cooked
by your mothers was delicious.
i
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really miss that taste.
However
, family bonding
in house
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taught
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me br
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br
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the
value of relationships.
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,
i
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forget my documents file in my room
due to
rush.It is
gray
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a gray
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coloured file which
i
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left on the table in
room
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the room
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. There is
table
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a table
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in your guest room on the right side ,
usally
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usually
put my all documents on it.I hope
file
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the file
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would
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be
on
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same
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place .
This
file not
anly
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only
any
have
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my all important documents but
also
some cash.Could you please
located
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this
file and send
to
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it to
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me via post
.
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I
willemail
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will email
you my new home address. I hope you will post
this
soon. Best regards, Parm
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grammar
Work on improving sentence structure and grammar to enhance readability. For example, 'I am writting this letter to thanks you' should be 'I am writing this letter to thank you.'
grammar
Ensure consistency in tenses to improve clarity. For example, 'family bonding in house taught br value of relationships' should be corrected for better understanding.
tone
The tone of the letter is appropriate and friendly, suitable for writing to a friend.
content completion
You have included all the relevant information such as thanking your friend, describing where you left the envelope, and asking for it to be returned. This helps achieve the task requirements.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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