The diagram below shiws the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Task 1 The diagram below shiws the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the

process

of making

sweetnear

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sweetener

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from sugar

cane

.

Overall

, there are 7 steps which

is beginning

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begin

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with growing and end with drying and cooling the sugar.

Firstly

,the sugar

cane

plant grows in the field which

take

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12 -18 months. Afterwards,

harvesting

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the harvesting

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process

starts manually or

by

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with

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the help of mechanics.

Then

,

sweetnear

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sweetener

cane

undergoes in crushing method and separates

juice

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the juice

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from the raw

cane

.

Additionally

, purification and an evaporation

process

takeplace

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take place

takes place

with the help of lime filters and the heat simultaneously and become the

syrup's

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syrups

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.

Furthermore

, that syrup undergoes in the centrifuge

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machine

and separates crystals carbohydrates from the liquid form.

And the

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last

process

is drying and cooling the crystal

form

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from

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carbohydrates would dry and cool by the help of

dryer

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a dryer

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than

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then

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it

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apply

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will

supply

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be supplied

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to the market.