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The presented table gives information about costs of the projects in the future five year period in American dollars for three environmental project for sustainable foresty.The supplied pie chart illustrates the expected expediture breakdown allocation for the next five year as the projects are set up.

The presented table gives information about costs of the projects in the future five year period in American dollars for three environmental project for sustainable foresty.The supplied pie chart illustrates the expected expediture breakdown allocation for the next five year as the projects are set up.
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The table illustrates information about
amount
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the amount
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 of money in
USA
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US
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 dollars that has
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 to provide new projects for sustainable forestry in West Africa,Central America and
South-East
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Southeast
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 Asia which
takes
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 place in
next
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the next
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 5
year
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years
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. The pie chart shows anticipated spending that will
spilt
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spill
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 for the
projects
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project
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instellition
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installation
 in
next
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the next
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 half of the decade.
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, it can be seen that in except form
South-east
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Southeast
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 Asia other two areas experienced some kind of decline and stability. Cease of a year expenditure set up cost and employee salaries take
huge
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 portion of
money
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 to itself. In the
5 year
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5-year
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of
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period South-East Asia will
recieve
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receive
huge
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 30 to 50 million
dollar
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,
while
other
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the other
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 two areas start with 10.5 and 20 million $ respectively.
Installion
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Installation
 and salaries will take
huge
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a huge
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 amount of money.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable forestry
  • environmental projects
  • expenditure breakdown
  • allocation
  • trends
  • fiscal forecasting
  • comparative analysis
  • long-term benefits
  • investment
  • funding sources
  • discrepancy
  • research and development
  • educational initiatives
  • planting strategies
  • financial requirements
  • impact assessment
  • cost analysis
  • project viability
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