The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram indicates Central Library before and after the changes were made to its layout. In general, Central Library has undergone significant changes to have a café, self-service facilities and a space dedicated

for

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events. Twenty years ago, to the right of the entrance, there was an enquiry desk. Now, it has been replaced by a café, and self-service facilities and

information

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an information

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desk have been arranged

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where used to be an area for adult

fiction

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books

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instead

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. Tables and chairs at the centre have been taken away, having two sofas now in the

room

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that

was

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were

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once used for CDs, videos and computer games

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leaving spaces in front of the entrance. The

room

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with sofas now has an area dedicated

for

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storytelling events,

along with

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children’s

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fiction

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books

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. The area

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for

children’s

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fiction

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books

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has become a lecture

room

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, and all reference

books

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have been placed between the computer

room

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and the

children’s

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fiction

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books

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. Not only the use of rooms, but the place of doors has undergone some changes too, as clearly indicated by the diagram. Particularly, the door of the computer

room

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has been moved from the side facing the

children’s

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fiction

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books

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to the side of the corridor in front of the entrance.

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, a new door has been added when the café was built.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fiction, books, room, children’s with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "indicates" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

221 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

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