The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram indicates Central Library before and after the changes were made to its layout. In general, Central Library has undergone significant changes to have a café, self-service facilities and a space dedicated
for
events.
Twenty years ago, to the right of the entrance, there was an enquiry desk. Now, it has been replaced by a café, and self-service facilities and Change preposition
to
information
desk have been arranged Correct article usage
an information
at
where used to be an area for adult Change preposition
apply
fiction
books
instead
. Tables and chairs at the centre have been taken away, having two sofas now in the room
that was
once used for CDs, videos and computer games Correct subject-verb agreement
were
and
leaving spaces in front of the entrance. The Correct word choice
apply
room
with sofas now has an area dedicated for
storytelling events, Change preposition
to
along with
children’s
fiction
books
. The area is
for Unnecessary verb
apply
children’s
fiction
books
has become a lecture room
, and all reference books
have been placed between the computer room
and the children’s
fiction
books
.
Not only the use of rooms, but the place of doors has undergone some changes too, as clearly indicated by the diagram. Particularly, the door of the computer room
has been moved from the side facing the children’s
fiction
books
to the side of the corridor in front of the entrance. Moreover
, a new door has been added when the café was built.Submitted by viktoria.popova92 on
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