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Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? What solutions can you suggest?

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In today's world, negative behaviour towards social issues and a lack of respect for others have been observed on a substantial scale. In my opinion, less parental involvement in teaching
children
 is the key cause behind
this
 trend,
while
 my possible suggestion involves raising awareness about respect.
To begin
 with, nowadays, almost all
children
 are growing up in a way that they think they can do whatever they want. Surprisingly, most
parents
 do not pay attention a lot to the development of
children
 being respectful to other
people
.
That is
 the point.
Parents
 tend to protect their offspring against others in approximately every situation, even if
children
 are wrong.
However
,
parents
 underestimate the gravity of the situation because
children
 might think that If I was wrong in
this
 case, my
parents
 would punish me. So, when
such
children
 get older, they think they all are right, and they do not have respect for other
people
's beliefs and thoughts, as a whole to society. In order to solve
this
 grave situation, I would suggest that beyond core subjects in educational establishments, the government should add a new subject to the syllabus of schedules. The government,
also
, should provide schools and universities with highly-trained experts who have the ability to teach students how to be well-mannered and respectful members of society. By implementing
such
 rules, I think,
people
 beginning from an early age can learn how they should behave in public
as well as
 they can acquire deep knowledge about what behaviour is acceptable and what is not in society. I would say that in order to compensate for
parents
' irresponsible approach to
this
 issue,
such
 a solution which I offered should be a necessity.
To sum up
, these days,
people
 tend to behave as they want and disrespect to others. I consider less parental engagement in their offspring's early development as an undeniable cause, and
additionally
, I would recommend solving
such
 a problem by implementing a lesson in which being respectful is taught to students in educational institutions.
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