Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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advancement of

techology

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technology

era has covered all parts of the globe including

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, medical

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and education.

However

,

due to

the improvement , there are some arguments among the public on whether

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lead

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to

widen

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or

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the gap between the wealthy and unwealthy individuals. I believe that

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statement will bring

equal

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to the communities which I will explain in the following paragraph.

To begin

with, there is no doubt that

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rich people can afford the latest technological gadgets , advanced education tools and healthcare technologies rather than

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low-paid ones.

Therefore

,

this

will lead to more significant economic opportunities.

For instance

, individuals with deep

pocket

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are more likely to have better access to healthcare services namely chemotherapy drugs that cost

hundred

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or

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dollars

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for each treatment.

As a result

, enhances their quality of life compared to the

unfortune

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unfortunate

ones.

On the other hand

, some people believe that with

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of the government and NGOs can bring connection between the societies by providing people with equal access

of

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internet

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, healthcare and education.

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Despite

all the dissimilarity, with a greater chance , every human being

are

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able to enjoy and experience the finer advancements.

For example

, third-class world

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are now able to use free WIFI and computers at the school to study and do research that can strengthen their academic levels and provide a better long run in the future.

In contrast

, if the

undeveloping

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undeveloped

countries

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neglected that

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more

war

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or diseases will occur in time to come that will harm the nearest countries even more. In conclusion,

tehnologies

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technology

nowadays are crucial

parts

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of

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mankinds

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mankind

mankind's

considering that

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help

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to boost their quality of life,

whereas

for

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those who are unable to adapt

with

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the

tehnologies

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technology

might be left even

further

behind. I strongly agree with the statement above which is

this

will bring

an

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equality to all

humankinds

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humankind

.