Task 1 The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information on the
quantity
of Caribbean Use synonyms
Island
Use synonyms
visitors
between 2010 and 2017.
From the graph, it is evident that the total number of Use synonyms
tourists
has been steadily increasing over the period. Use synonyms
However
, alterations in the amount of Linking Words
tourists
staying on cruise ships and on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
are not linear.
Fix the agreement mistake
islands
To begin
with, the Linking Words
quantity
of Use synonyms
all
Correct determiner usage
apply
tourists
visiting Use synonyms
Caribbean
Correct article usage
the Caribbean
Use synonyms
Island
was estimated at just 1 Fix the agreement mistake
Islands
million
in 2010. The increase in their Use synonyms
quantity
was steady until 2015. Use synonyms
Then
, during the year there wasn’t any change, and the total Linking Words
visitors
amount remained at about 2.75 Use synonyms
million
in 2016. Use synonyms
At the end
of the period - in 2017 - there was a sharp rise, and the line graph reached its peak at exactly 3.5 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
visitors
.
As to the Use synonyms
tourists
who were staying on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
, their number was Add an article
the island
at
nearly 0.75 Change preposition
apply
million
Use synonyms
during
2010 and 2011. After Change preposition
between
that
their amount went up in a Add a comma
that,
million
over 2 years, when in 2013 it stopped changing before 2016. Use synonyms
Afterwards
a sudden drop and rise happened, and by the end of the Add a comma
Afterwards,
period
the number of Add a comma
period,
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
had again reached its maximum at just 1.5. The graph line of the Add an article
the island
tourists
staying on cruise ships shows that their Use synonyms
quantity
grew to 0.5 and fell to the initial value of 0.25 between 2010 and 2012Use synonyms
,
when it rapidly started to grow again and peaked in 2017 at 2 Remove the comma
apply
million
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words quantity, island, visitors, tourists, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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