Task 1 The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information on the
quantity
of Caribbean Island
visitors
between 2010 and 2017.
From the graph, it is evident that the total number of tourists
has been steadily increasing over the period. However
, alterations in the amount of tourists
staying on cruise ships and on island
are not linear.
Fix the agreement mistake
islands
To begin
with, the quantity
of all
Correct determiner usage
apply
tourists
visiting Caribbean
Correct article usage
the Caribbean
Island
was estimated at just 1 Fix the agreement mistake
Islands
million
in 2010. The increase in their quantity
was steady until 2015. Then
, during the year there wasn’t any change, and the total visitors
amount remained at about 2.75 million
in 2016. At the end
of the period - in 2017 - there was a sharp rise, and the line graph reached its peak at exactly 3.5 million
visitors
.
As to the tourists
who were staying on island
, their number was Add an article
the island
at
nearly 0.75 Change preposition
apply
million
during
2010 and 2011. After Change preposition
between
that
their amount went up in a Add a comma
that,
million
over 2 years, when in 2013 it stopped changing before 2016. Afterwards
a sudden drop and rise happened, and by the end of the Add a comma
Afterwards,
period
the number of Add a comma
period,
visitors
staying on island
had again reached its maximum at just 1.5. The graph line of the Add an article
the island
tourists
staying on cruise ships shows that their quantity
grew to 0.5 and fell to the initial value of 0.25 between 2010 and 2012,
when it rapidly started to grow again and peaked in 2017 at 2 Remove the comma
apply
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words quantity, island, visitors, tourists, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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