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The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.

The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.
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The provided line graph illustrates the
number
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 of
community
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communities
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 in three various areas (
Columbia
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,
Yamhil
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Yamhill
 and
Washington
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) from 1940 to 2000. It can be clearly seen that the
population
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 experienced
an
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 dramatic upward trend in
Washington
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.
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,the association witnessed a slight upward trend in both
Columbia
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 and Yamhill over the period. In 1940,precisely 75000
of
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people
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 would
lived
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 in
Washington
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 and
then
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 the
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number of
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population
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 increased moderately to nearly 12000 in 1970.
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,the
numeral
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 of
people
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 rocketed to just over 240000 in
Washington
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 in 2000.(Which was the highest
number
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 of
population
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 over the period).
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,the
number
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 of
people
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 who lived in Yamhill was roughly 30000 in 1940.(Which was the least
number
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 of
community
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communities
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 over the whole year).
Following
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this
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,the crowd rose modestly to 45000 in 1970 and
then
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 It doubled significantly to 90000 in 2000.
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,just under 30000
people
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 lived in
Columbia
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 in 1940
an
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then
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 the
population
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 climbed slightly to approximately 35000 in 1970.
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,the
number
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 of
people
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 who lived in
Columbia
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 soared to 75000 in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, columbia, washington, population, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Census
  • Migration
  • Infrastructural development
  • Economic impact
  • Urbanization
  • Rural to urban shift
  • Growth rate
  • Satellite cities
  • Migration patterns
  • Local economy
  • Population density
  • Service provision
  • Housing market
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Population spike
  • Sustainable growth
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