The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevemt
The diagram illustrates the
process
of producing sugar
from sugar
cane. Overall
, it can be inferred that this
process
consists of seven distinct stages, beginning with the cultivation of sugar
cane and culminating in the final product of refined sugar
ready for distribution.
Initially
, sugar
canes are cultivated and allowed to mature over a period of 12 to 18 months. Once they have reached maturity, the harvesting process
begins, which can be performed either manually by farmers or mechanically using tractors. Following the harvest, the canes are transported to a mill where they undergo crushing to extract the juice.
Subsequently
, the extracted juice undergoes purification using a limestone filter. The purified juice is then
heated in an evaporator to remove water, concentrating it into a syrup. This
syrup is transferred to a centrifuge, which spins at high speed to separate the sugar
crystals from the syrup.
Finally
, the sugar
crystals undergo a drying and cooling process
, resulting in the production of refined sugar
ready for packaging and distribution.Submitted by michellyonggo on
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