Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say our main environmental

problem

is the loss of particular species of

plants

and

animals

, but

also

someone

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some

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say we have more important

problem

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problems

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for our

environmental

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environment

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. I think

plants

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the plants

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and

animals

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animal

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specious

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species

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decrease is

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are

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a

problem

for our

environmental

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environment

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, but I think there

have

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are

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more important

problem

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problems

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,

such

as

water

pollution

.

Currently

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Currently,

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we all can all can hear some news about

specious

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species

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of

plants

and

animals

have

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that have

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been loss

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loss

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lost

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, our

environmental

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environment

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has

became

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become

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bed

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bad

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for wildlife,

their

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and their

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habitant

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habitats

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have become smaller. It is a damage

problem

, but we are

realize

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realising

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this

problem

and we begin to protect

plants

and

animals

. Now we build

lot

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a lot

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of wildlife

protect

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protection

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area

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areas

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and we

also

use technology to help some species

plants

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of plants

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and

animals

to feed their offspring.

This

problem

I think is not

a

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an

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emerge

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emerging

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problem

for us.

Moreover

, I think the

more

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most

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important environmental

problem

is

water

pollution

. We all know that

water

is our life necessary, if we don’t have clear

water

to drink, we will

go

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apply

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die. But now so many people don’t have

conscious

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a consciousness

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to protect

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of protecting

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water

, thy

weast

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waste

water

, they

also

full chemical things into

water

,

this

may not only

pollution

river

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rivers

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and lack, but

also

pollution

underground

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of underground

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water

.

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example

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example,

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some factory

put

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puts

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all the

pollution

water

into

river

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the river

a river

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, someone

affaried

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is afraid

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that policy will punish them, they put the tube underground to pull

water

. I think we need to realize how important and dangerous is

this

pollution

begin

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is

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. We need to have some way to forbid

the

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these

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things happen.

For

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my opinion, there

have

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are

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more important

problem

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problems

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for our

environmental

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environment

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not just the loss of species of

plants

and

animals

.