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The bart chart below shows US Seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forecast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bart chart below shows US Seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forecast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the expenditure on
seafood
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 imports from 2002 to 2022 and the prediction in 2032. The pie graph depicts the composition of countries of origin in 2022. As can be seen , the highest value of
seafood
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 imported in 2022 and China has the biggest proportion as the exported country for the US. The first graph, in 2002 stood at just above 5
billion
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, followed by 2012 at around 10
billion
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. After that, there was a significant increase at approximately 20
billion
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, climbing 2 times from before that and it can be the highest level of
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 period in 2022. In prediction, the total of US
seafood
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 imports will slightly decrease to around 18
billion
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. In the second chart, there were several countries that export
seafood
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 products to the US. The first ranked is China with 28%,
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 23%, and Canada with 16%. Later on, Indonesia is
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fourth-ranked with 9%, followed by Vietnam at 8% and Ecuador a 7%.
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, other countries
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 export
seafood
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 to the US at around 9%.
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