The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summeraise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the method of using geothermal
energy
to produce electricity
.
From an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that producing energy
with the help of geothermal energy
is composed of five different stages. Also
, the facilities are built both underground and on the ground.
In the first stage of producing electricity
from geothermal energy
, cold water
is stored in a relatively large tank. The cold water
then
is pumped down for 4.5 kilometres and injected into a well which is located underground. Next,
this
water
passes through a geothermal zone (which is made of hot rocks), to produce hot water
.
In the third stage, the produced hot water
is pumped up and goes to a condenser which produces steam. The produced steam is used to rotate the turbine which works by the power of steam. Finally
, there is a generator that is
driven by a turbine and produces electricity
. This
electricity
goes directly to a power station, thus
citizens can use it in their daily routines.Submitted by amir1375.6 on
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