The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Write at least 150 words. You may spend 20 minutes to complete the task

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

Write at least 150 words. You may spend 20 minutes to complete the task
The bar chart depicts the
expenditure
on consumer goods in 2010 in
France
and the
UK
, categorised by type of goods.
Overall
, cars represent the highest
expenditure
in both
France
and the
UK
,
whereas
computers, which rank second in
expenditure
in
France
, are fourth in the
UK
, being surpassed by books and cameras. In both countries, cars had the highest
expenditure
, accounting for 400,000
pounds
sterling in
France
and 450,000
pounds
sterling in the
UK
. Computers, the second highest
expenditure
in
France
at just under 400,000
pounds
sterling, were fourth in the
UK
.
In contrast
, books were the second highest
expenditure
in the
UK
, at just above 400,000
pounds
sterling, surpassing the
expenditure
on cars in
France
. Regarding the least expensive consumer goods, cameras ranked third in the
UK
but had the lowest
expenditure
in
France
, at 150,000
pounds
sterling. Meanwhile, perfume had the lowest
expenditure
in the
UK
, at just under 150,000
pounds
sterling.
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