The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, A,erican, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, A,erican, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
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bar chart depics the vacation enterprises of foreign tourists from 4 countries (China, America, Turkey, and Brazil) in Greece in August 2019. There are three types of activities: at the beach, reading books, and visiting
places
. At first sight, we can divide these four countries into two groups: the first group that contains China and America with the significant preference of a book reading, and the second group (Turkey and Brazil), which participants prefere to spend their time at the beach. Visiting
places
is on the
last
place in both of the groups.
Firstly
, more details about the first group. Chinese tourists are mostly the reading, who are spend average 8
hours
daily with the book, only 3
hours
at the seaside, and the minimal amoun of
hours
- only 1 hour - on an excursions. The activities of American tourists are more stable in terms of
hours
. They spend 5
hours
with a book, 4
hours
at the beach, and at least 3
hours
on an excursion.
Secondly
, the comparison of Turkish and Brasilian guests. The graphs of their entertainments show some similarity in their preferences, there is only the difference in the time they spend in the different
places
. They enjoy the sea 6 and 5
hours
respectively,
then
they are riding books 4
hours
- the same time, and
at the end
of their list is the visit of the historical
places
- 3 and 2
hours
respectively.
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