The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.

The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.
The bar graphs depict the number of marriages and divorces in eight different
regions
between the years 1981 and 1994.
Overall
,
while
marriage rates generally decreased across the
regions
, with the exception of
Denmark
, divorce rates increased in most
regions
, with the USA,
Denmark
, and Germany being exceptions to
this
trend. Focusing on marriage statistics, in 1981, Americans topped the chart with just over 10 marriages per 1,000
people
, but
this
figure dropped to approximately 7 by 1994,
although
it remained the highest among the
regions
.
Similarly
, other
regions
started with high marriage rates ranging from about 6 to 7 per 1,000
people
but all saw reductions by the end of the period. Notably,
Denmark
had the lowest number of marriages in 1981 at 5 per 1,000
people
, but
this
figure rose to around 8 by 1994, making it the second highest. As for divorce statistics, only the USA and
Denmark
experienced declines. The US saw a decrease from about 5 divorces per 1,000
people
to just over 4,
while
Denmark
's rate slightly reduced from 3 to 2.8 per 1,000
people
. Germany's divorce rate remained constant at 2 per 1,000
people
for both years. The UK and Finland saw increases but remained within the range of 2 to 4 per 1,000
people
. Japan and Italy
also
experienced increases but to a lesser extent, both ranging between 0 to 2 per 1,000
people
.
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