The table shows the worldwide market share of mobile phone manufacturers in the 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
market
presence of three mobile phone operating systems in five countries in 2015
Overall
, android-based smartphones dominated the market
of all nations. It is also
noticeable that iOS devices were more popular in more developed countries.
In detail, the market
share
of android
in Brazil in 2015 was 91%, 20% higher than that in China and Germany. Capitalize word
Android
Such
a difference was twice as much when comparing the figure for Brazil with the UK and the USA, the latter standing at over a half. In stark contrast, windows-based devices was
the least popular, accounting for below 10% in each Change the verb form
were
countries
, reaching as low as 1% in China.
iOS was the second most widely used operating system, taking up around 40% Change to a singular noun
country
the
Change preposition
of the
market
share
in the UK and the USA. Its share
shrunk twofold in China to one-fourth,
and was even lower in Germany at nearly one-fifth. Being the least economically developed nation out of the five, Brazil had only a negligible 4% of its mobile phone platform Remove the comma
apply
share
belonging to iOS.Submitted by dungcbn on
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