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The above graph depicts the rise in

population

of Urban cities

such

as The Philippines,

Malaysia

, Thailand and Indonesia. The information was gathered for the research during the

years

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1970 and 2020, with the graph

also

depicting the expected

population

in 2030 and 2040. When taking a general overview of the graph, it becomes apparent to the readers that all the countries depicted above

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through a very dramatic increase in

population

numbers as the

years

go on. In a similar manner, all countries are

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peak populations in the year 2040. The Philippines

,

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seems to be experiencing the lowest and the slowest rise in

population

when compared with the others. After remaining almost the same from the

years

1970-1980, the

population

saw a rather dramatic increase of almost 16% coming up to the year 1990. Since

then

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, the nation has been expecting a steady and constant rise in its general

population

. A reader would

also

begin to observe that when compared to the Philippines,

Malaysia

has experienced rather a dramatic increase in

population

. When thinking of the

overall

results,

Malaysia

would be seen as the nation with the highest

population

. Indonesia, similar to

Malaysia

has experienced a rather rapid growth in

population

, specifically from the

years

2010-2020. Both these nations are expected to experience similar growths in

population

in the coming 20

years

.