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The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.
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The given pie charts illustrate the distribution of the number of journal articles read each week by all
students
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, PhD
students
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, and junior lecturers in an Australian university.
Overall
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, it can be observed that the 1 to 5
range
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 is the most significant
expenditure
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 read by all
students
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,
while
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 the 12+
range
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 had the least share.
Additionally
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, the number of journal articles read by junior lecturers shows a markedly different pattern compared to the rest of the two categories in terms of the 1 to 5
range
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. In the category of all
students
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, the largest proportion was allocated to the 1 to 5
range
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, accounting for 67% of the total
expenditure
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.
This
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 was followed by the 6 to 11 division and the 12+, which constituted 21% and 12% respectively. In comparison, the 12+ part allocated 80% of their
expenditure
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, with PhD
students
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, which is substantially higher than the 1 to 5
range
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.
Conversely
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, junior lecturers made up 75% of the 6 to 11 section, which is the greatest percentage in
this
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 category.
Furthermore
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, the 12+ division represented 24%, compared to the 1 to 5 portion, which is considerably less than all other categories, making only 1% of the
expenditure
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.
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