The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The present maps illustrate what changes are in the
park
in 1980 and today.
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Overall
, in the past most of where Linking Words
park
was covered by flowers and trees; Use synonyms
however
, these days, the vegetation has been reduced. Linking Words
Also
, the entrances to the Linking Words
park
are increasing.
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According to
the 1980 plan, in the west and south of the Linking Words
park
, we can see gates; Use synonyms
moreover
, three various pictures had Trees and flowers. Linking Words
In addition
, it had a pound bench area. unfortunately, Linking Words
this
kind of where the region did not have a zone for children.
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Nevertheless
, currently, in 4 diverse aspects of the Linking Words
park
, we have an entrance; Use synonyms
furthermore
, in the southeast, the playground is added Linking Words
instead
of the green zone; Linking Words
thereafter
, they additional facilities, which in the northeast for picnics, yet another district which does not alter is in the west , but the number of bench fall. It’s nice that Linking Words
this
parke alternative in its road because the Linking Words
last
time, Linking Words
this
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park
had the individual way.Use synonyms
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