The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The present maps illustrate what changes are in the
park
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in 1980 and today.
Overall
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, in the past most of where
park
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was covered by flowers and trees;
however
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, these days, the vegetation has been reduced.
Also
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, the entrances to the
park
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are increasing.
According to
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the 1980 plan, in the west and south of the
park
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, we can see gates;
moreover
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, three various pictures had Trees and flowers.
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, it had a pound bench area. unfortunately,
this
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kind of where the region did not have a zone for children.
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, currently, in 4 diverse aspects of the
park
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, we have an entrance;
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, in the southeast, the playground is added
instead
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of the green zone;
thereafter
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, they additional facilities, which in the northeast for picnics, yet another district which does not alter is in the west , but the number of bench fall. It’s nice that
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parke alternative in its road because the
last
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time,
this
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park
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had the individual way.
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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