The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The present maps illustrate what changes are in the
park
in 1980 and today.
Overall
, in the past most of where
park
was covered by flowers and trees;
however
, these days, the vegetation has been reduced.
Also
, the entrances to the
park
are increasing.
According to
the 1980 plan, in the west and south of the
park
, we can see gates;
moreover
, three various pictures had Trees and flowers.
In addition
, it had a pound bench area. unfortunately,
this
kind of where the region did not have a zone for children.
Nevertheless
, currently, in 4 diverse aspects of the
park
, we have an entrance;
furthermore
, in the southeast, the playground is added
instead
of the green zone;
thereafter
, they additional facilities, which in the northeast for picnics, yet another district which does not alter is in the west , but the number of bench fall. It’s nice that
this
parke alternative in its road because the
last
time,
this
park
had the individual way.
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