Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •describe the photograph you sent to the competition •tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo will be shown •invite him/her to the exhibition

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Dear Prachu, I am writing
this
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letter to invite you to visit an exhibition next week with me. I have something exciting to share with you, you won’t believe it, but I want the competition that we discussed
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time we met. There were various themes available to participate in, but you know my prediction for nature.
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, I enrolled in the "Magical Nature". My photograph consists of the sunset with the surreal beauty of nature, Birds, waterfalls, and rainbow. The committee decided to exhibit my work at 'The Golden Art Gallery' next Saturday.
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just near to my house, around 12 minutes by car. They
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want to appreciate my efforts with the medal there. As you already know, you are the only family, I have in
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city, so I’d be more than happy if you could join me on Saturday. And don’t worry about passes. I already have an extra for you. Hoping for your positive response, Your best friend, DKP
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Expand on the descriptions of the photograph and the exhibition to provide a more complete response.
coherence cohesion
Ensure there is a logical flow between your ideas; the letter jumps from one point to another abruptly.
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Good use of a friendly and inviting tone.
coherence cohesion
Clear greeting and closing, makes the letter feel personal and engaging.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph contains a single idea, which helps in maintaining clarity.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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