The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The graph gives information about how often Americans ate in
fast food
restaurants from 2003 to 2013.
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fast-food
Overall
, the most frequent time over the period given was once a week
and one
or twice a month,Correct your spelling
once
whereas
every day and never represented the smallest proportions.
On the other hand
, there are fluctuations between several times a week
, once a week
and once or twice a week
.In 2013, the frequency of once or twice a month increased was close to 35%, which exceeded that of once a week
for the first time, becoming the most frequent in that year.
Over the following ten years, however
, the figure for people who either ate in fast food restaurants every day or never stood at under 5%.While the
number of Americans Correct word choice
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ate
in fast food restaurants several times a Correct pronoun usage
who ate
week
stood at about 17% at first,
and then
it rose to 20% but finally
dropped to the lowest point in 2013. Meanwhile, we can see that the number of a few times a year was approximately only 13 at first,
but reached a peak of 15% after 2006.Submitted by fiasngs on
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