The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
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that
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frequency
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people
eating fast Use synonyms
food
in America over one decade,starting from 2003.
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the largest proportion of Linking Words
people
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fast Change preposition
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food
was once a week,Use synonyms
while
the fewest Linking Words
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food
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was
every day.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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the most remarkable change in the Add a comma
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frequency
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with
people
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ate
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who ate
at
fast Change preposition
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food
once or twice a month.
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Fisrt
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at
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all
people
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food
once a week with about 31% in 2003.Use synonyms
Then
increased slightly in 2006 reaching 4% and decreased markedly in 2013 with 2%. The Linking Words
frequency
of Use synonyms
people
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eating
food
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in
once or twice a month with 30% in 2003,and Change preposition
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then
dropped significantly in the Linking Words
followed
3 years Replace the word
following
with
5%. After that,there was a sharp rise in 2013 Change preposition
to
which
reaching approximately 8%. Correct pronoun usage
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, the part of several times a week Linking Words
growth
in 2006 Replace the word
grew
with
4% and Change preposition
by
fall
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fell
with
5% in 2013.
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by
people
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ate at
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eating
food
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in
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and
never Correct word choice
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was
remained stable at 3%,15% and 4% in 2006 and 2013. All of these reduced minimally with 1% Unnecessary verb
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excepted
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frequency
of Use synonyms
people
ate at fast Use synonyms
food
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in
a few times a year,there was a jump slightly with 2%.Change preposition
apply
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