The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares how five different countries producing
films
varied in three distinctive years
: 2007, 2008, and 2009.
Overall
, there was an upward tendency in the numbers of films
of B, C, and E produced in the examined years
, while
the opposite trend was true for the two remaining countries. In addition
, country
A accounted for the largest proportion of film production, and the last
rank was for country
E in all three years
.
Countries that experienced an increase had B, constituting around 50 films
produced in 2007 and 2008, then
dramatically surging up to 70 films
in the last
year. A considerable
growth was Remove the article
Considerable
also
witnessed in C, ranging from nearly 10 films
in 2007 to around 20 films
in 2009, approximately 3 times lower compared to the figure of B. E indicated a stable movement of just around 10 films
in all three years
, hitting a bottom of film production in 2 later years
.
2007 and 2008 were the most thriving years
of country
A when creating about 88 films
a year, positioning at the first rank, before experiencing a slight decrease to 80 films
in 2009. In terms of country
D, 2007 had 15 films
, 5 units higher than that figure of 2008, in the year 2009, country
D experienced almost the same number of films
as in 2007 but a bit lower.Submitted by thanhtu.thcsbt on
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