Topic 3: The chart below shows the number of films produced five countries in three years.

The bar chart illustrates how many

films

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were made by five different nations over a 2-year period.

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, more

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were produced in A and B than in

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, D, and

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.

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, over the period examined, there was an increase in film production rates in B,

C

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and

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,

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the opposite was true for A and D. In 2007, over 85

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were produced by A, which was the highest.

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figure remained stable in 2008, followed by a slight decline at 80

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in 2009. The second most prolific film producer is B, making 50

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in 2007, which rose marginally by 2

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in 2008 before witnessing a

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increase

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70

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by the end of the period.

C

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, D and

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produced far

few

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films

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in comparison, with figures being 8, 15 and 9 respectively in 2009. After 2 years, the number of

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C

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produce

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doubled to 16, compared to just a negligible rise

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of

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2

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for

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. The figure of D,

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, decreased by 6

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in 2008, before rebounding to 13

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in 2009.