Topic 3: The chart below shows the number of films produced five countries in three years.

Topic 3: The chart below shows the number of films produced five countries in three years.
The bar chart illustrates how many
films
were made by five different nations over a 2-year period.
Overall
, more
films
were produced in A and B than in
C
, D, and
E
.
Also
, over the period examined, there was an increase in film production rates in B,
C
and
E
,
whereas
the opposite was true for A and D. In 2007, over 85
films
were produced by A, which was the highest.
This
figure remained stable in 2008, followed by a slight decline at 80
films
in 2009. The second most prolific film producer is B, making 50
films
in 2007, which rose marginally by 2
films
in 2008 before witnessing a
substantially
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substantial
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increase
at
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to
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70
films
by the end of the period.
C
, D and
E
produced far
few
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fewer
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films
in comparison, with figures being 8, 15 and 9 respectively in 2009. After 2 years, the number of
films
C
produce
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produced
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doubled to 16, compared to just a negligible rise
by
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of
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2
films
for
E
. The figure of D,
by contrast
, decreased by 6
films
in 2008, before rebounding to 13
films
in 2009.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words films, c, e with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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