The charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accommodation in three different years.
The pie charts compare various accommodation types in terms of popularity among tourists in three different
years
namely 1988, 1998 and 2008.
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Overall
, the most popular choice of accommodation among tourists is —> was staying with a host family. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
this
tendency declined after 20 Linking Words
years
, Use synonyms
whereas
staying in a hotel, renting an apartment, and camping became more popular.
In 1988, more than half of vacationers preferred staying with a host family, which was twice as popular as camping, chosen by just over a quarter of Linking Words
travelers
. Hotels and Change the spelling
travellers
apartment
were even less favored, with Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
figure
of 15% and 7%, respectively. Ten Fix the agreement mistake
figures
years
later, far fewer tourists opt to stay in a tent, as the figure halved to just 13%. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the other types of lodging saw an increase in popularity, most noticeably hotels, attracting 7% more vacationers.
Over the following 10 Linking Words
years
, Use synonyms
while
the figures Linking Words
of
hotels and camping remained relatively stable, Change preposition
for
this
is not the case for the other accommodation choice. Specifically, the proportion of holidaymakers Linking Words
rented
apartments doubled Correct pronoun usage
who rented
at
22%, Change preposition
to
whereas
the percentage of those Linking Words
chose
to stay with a host family decreased by a tenth.Correct pronoun usage
who chose
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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