the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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four typical meals of three types of nutrients consumed in the USA.
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, the percentages of
sodium
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and saturated fat in dinner were the highest,
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of three types of nutrients in breakfast was the lowest. At breakfast, the
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of consumption of saturated fat and added
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was equal and 2% higher than the
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of consumption of
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. At lunch, the percentages of consumption of
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and saturated fat were only 3% different. As added
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, lunch was less consumed at 16%.
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dinner,
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was consumed the most, showing by its
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of 43%. After that, the saturated fat was moderately consumed at 37%. Added
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is consumed the least during dinner, about 23%. About snacks, the
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of added
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was consumed the most, which was 42%.
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, saturated fat and
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accounted for 21% and 14% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, sodium, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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