The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
This
line graph shows the average fluctuation in costs of three metals
in 2014.
Overall
, The prices
for each metal drops
steadily through the year. Correct subject-verb agreement
drop
Nickel
being the most volatile, recorded the most positive change in price
at the beginning and continues to decline at a faster rate compared to other metals
.
In the first quarter of the year from January to March, The price
of nickel
dropped from its highest of 6% to nearly 1% while
the price
of zinc
appreciated from 1% to 3%, However
, the price
of copper remained relatively stable, it only dropped slightly from 2% to nearly 1%.
In the second quarter, we see the most significant drop in prices
especially considering nickel
and zinc
, a negative trend in prices
for both these metals
was recorded, nickel
being the most affected, dropping to its lowest at nearly -3% and zinc
drops to -1% in the month of June, However
, from October to December, prices
of all metals
starts to surge with zinc
at 2% followed by copper and nickel
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Vocabulary: Replace the words metals, prices, nickel, price, zinc with synonyms.
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