The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided map presents three possible options for
construct
a new entertainment centre.
Change the verb form
constructing
Overall
, it is clear that
site C has an ideal zone for this
purpose due to
its located
in the wide green Replace the word
location
area
.Thus
this
place characterised
by Add a missing verb
is characterised
good
Correct article usage
a good
sightseenig
view and Correct your spelling
sightseeing
refresh
air.
Correct your spelling
fresh
Firstly
, in comparison, A and B sites are situated in unsuitable area
for leisure. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
However
site B is located in active
Add an article
an active
the active
area
surrounded by shopping
centre, it provides Correct article usage
a shopping
the
entertainment and many other Correct article usage
apply
vacilities
there. Correct your spelling
facilities
Thus
, there is no need for recreation a
new centre nearby. Change preposition
in a
While the
site A is located Correct word choice
The
nearby
Correct your spelling
near
Correct article usage
an industerial
industerial
Correct your spelling
industrial
area
which has negative
environmental impact. Add an article
a negative
thus
, is not feasible for this
project.
To sum up
, we could say that the feasible location for this
plan is C due to
the menthioned
reasons.Correct your spelling
mentioned
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to, thus".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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