Some people think that living in a big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is an ongoing statement suggesting that dwelling in metropolises is dramatically harmful

for

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one’s physical

health

. From my point of view, I only partially

consent

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agree

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with

this

idea since

metropolises

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metropolise

living conditions can indeed cause severe

diseases

but

also

can cure them with great efficiency as well. It is obvious

to note

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that most

health

problems tend to occur in modern

cities

since the environment is direly polluted. To be specific, as fuel

such

as coal and gas is vastly used by

transportations

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transportation

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and factories in the urban area, exhausted fumes thereby are sent out to the environment, causing considerable illness regarding the respiratory system.

For instance

, cancer, asthma and pneumonia can be stated as some prominent lung

diseases

which are causing lethal consequences in numerous

cities

around the world. The rural areas,

on the contrary

, where there is little fossil fuels used, often have their dweller’s lungs strong and healthy.

Hence

,

environment

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environmental

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contamination in megacities is the main cause

for

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of

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the downgrade of the

inhabitants

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inhabitant's

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health

. Though

diseases

are a downside to living in

cities

, it is undeniable that their top-notch facilities can cure them completely with

such

ease and convenience. To be specific,

hospital

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hospitals

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and

health

facilities are often abundantly constructed in

cities

and their capacities can be enormous. Compared to the rural counterpart, where clinical services are regularly scarce and out of the people’s reach, though there is little illness, when it emerges, it is

of

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extreme difficulty

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to get the patient to a

health

centre. In conclusion,

although

the downsides regarding

health

in

cities

are existent

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exist

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, the modern faculties of them, which can provide aid in curing those

diseases

, can not be overlooked.