The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.
The diagrams below
compares
the Change the verb form
compare
amount
of buses which Change the quantifier
number
incoming
on time and Add a missing verb
are incoming
lamentation
of passengers from 1999 to 2003.
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Overall
, during this
five - year
period, in 1999 remained the biggest indicator with 85% and 86% Correct your spelling
five-year
in
arriving on time, with all other times of service.
In 2000 there was Change preposition
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sharp
drop from 85% to 82%, Add an article
a sharp
also
it is
was the lowest index in Unnecessary verb
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first
chart. Change the article
the first
However
, the degree become increasing and was stable to the end of 2003 with
85%. It is interesting to note that Change preposition
at
in
the beginning of Change the preposition
at
target
was stable Correct article usage
the target
with
86%, Change preposition
at
while
from 2001 it is
started to decrease, Unnecessary verb
apply
also
only in 2003 target index was lower than actual
.
As can be seen from the second diagram, was number of complaints in the beginning was Correct article usage
the actual
small
amount of appeal and each year was increased. In the 2003 was the biggest displeasure people was 120 from 1000.Add an article
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