The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.
The juxtaposed maps illustrate how Kimsville has changed since 2002 till today.
Kimsville used to be greener than today, but there has been a significant change in the
city
in terms of structure and design.
In retrospect, in 2002, just had a simple structure therefore
it had awe-inspiring woods. There were just three facilities including a shopping centre, a factory and an old cinema. All the city
area was surrounded by woods.
After a few years, the city
structure has absolutely changed. The old factory base has been replaced with a new software company. The old cinema which was based below the city
centre has been converted into a pub. There is a new train station built in the west of Kimsville. In the southwest and northwest corners of the city
, the woods had been cut down to make room for new residential facilities. In the south-west, trees were cleared to make way for a football stadium. Despite obvious changes in some parts, 3 parts of the city
haven’t changed from 2002 to today namely the city
centre, south-east and west-east.Submitted by checkmyessay9 on
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