The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.
The two maps show what happened in the town of Kimsville over the
last
nine years: from 2002 until the present day.
Overall
in the past, the city
was more natural than now.
First of all, the north-west and south-west of the city
have seen big improvements. These areas used to be full of trees, but the trees were chopped down and new apartments and a football stadium have been built. Also
, a new train station has been constructed between them.
Another change is the expansion of the shopping centre, which is in the north of the city
centre. In addition
, in 2002, there was an old cinema in the south of the city
. In recent years, it has become a pub. Also
, the factory near the city
centre has been knocked down and replaced by a software company.Submitted by checkmyessay9 on
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