The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006

The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006
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The line graph gives information on the changes in
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the price
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of 800
grams
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of four types of
bread
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in a European country between 2001 and 2005. It is evident that
while
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brown, white and
rye
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bread
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saw an increase, there were wild fluctuations in the
price
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of wholegrain.
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, brown
bread
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experienced the most dramatic climb in
price
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. In 2001, brown, white and
rye
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bread
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were roughly the same
price
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at 0.6
euros
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per 800
grams
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; whole grain
bread
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was slightly more expensive at 0.8
euros
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. With the exception of
rye
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bread
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, all the types of
bread
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increased in
price
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the following year: wholegrain
bread
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experienced the most dramatic increase of an extra euro for 800
grams
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, brown
bread
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rose 1.5
euros
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, and white
bread
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’s
price
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climbed to 1 euro.
On the other hand
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, the cost of
rye
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bread
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dropped slightly to 0.5
euros
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.
Nonetheless
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, from 2003 onwards, the brown, white and
rye
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bread
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became steadily more expensive. By 2005, their respective prices were 1.6
euros
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, 1.3
euros
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, and 0.7
euros
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per 800
grams
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.
On the other hand
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, the
price
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of whole grain experienced a dramatic decline - it fell to its lowest at 0.7
euros
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in 2004, before rising slightly to 0.8
euros
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per 800
grams
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by 2005.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, grams, bread, rye, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Analyze
  • Price trend
  • Period
  • Increase / Decrease in price
  • Compare
  • Starting prices
  • Shift over time
  • Causes
  • Inflation
  • Cost of wheat
  • Consumer demand
  • Price volatility
  • Types of bread
  • Market trends
  • Economic conditions
  • Euros
  • 800 grams
  • European country
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