Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.
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The map illustrates the developments that occurred over a century in the Chorelywood village which is near London city and the crowd has grown slightly.
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, the suburb has undergone development in four phases from 1868 to 1994, including building the main road, motorway, railway line,
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Park and golf course and the community increased over that period and acquired more land for future constructions of amenities. It is conspicuous that
initially
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the village had a main road and the suburb was constructed in 1868-1883 on a small piece of land.
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, it can be seen from the graph more houses were added in 1883-1922 on the west side.
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, the population augmented and settled in the
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and it grew from 1922 to 1970 and extended in the west-southern direction. Probing ahead, the motorway was built in 1970 on the east and a roundabout was added to slow the traffic. The fourth phase was started between 1970-1994 and more residential area was acquired in the right direction of the diagram by the Government.
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, a train track was built on the south in 1909 and
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station,
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Park and Golf Course were added in the south direction.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chorleywood with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Steadily
  • Pivotal events
  • Significant change
  • Transportation links
  • Commuter village
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Public facilities
  • Infrastructure
  • Environmental impact
  • Community life
  • Conservation efforts
  • Maintaining character
  • Vicinity
  • Unique aspects
  • Common challenges
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