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The diagram below illustrates the various stages involved in publishing a book

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The diagram below illustrates the various stages involved in publishing a book
The presented diagram below represents numerous steps of publishing a man-made
book
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.
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, there are some main stages of distributing a
book
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. A paper is considered as
an
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only one raw material to write a text on it. Publishing a
book
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 is a man-made procedure.
Process
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The process
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 begins with writing a
book
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,
ending
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 with distributing a publication to bookshops.
Firstly
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,
author
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the author
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 writes a
book
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 on typing machine, making
masterpiece
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a masterpiece
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 or another literature trash. Afterwards,
ready-made
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the ready-made
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book
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 is sent to
publishing
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a publishing
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 house.
At there
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,
sent
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the sent
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book
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 is studied by
specialist-editors
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specialist editors
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, who will decide whether a
book
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 is worthy to be published or not. In case of success,
publishing
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the publishing
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 house
contact
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contacts
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 the writer to make
contract
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a contract
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.
Thereupon
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,
layout
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the layout
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 is designed to create a positive reading experience. Well-designed books are easier to read, which is quite convenient for the reader. After tons of prototypes of
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the mockup
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mockup
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, the final decision on
model
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the model
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 is made, which will be used in
original
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the original
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.
After
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this
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, printing the actual
book
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 is the next 7th stage, which is done by
printer
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the printer
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. After printing it, the
book
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 is
bended
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bent
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, obtaining a cover.
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, a
book
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, made with effort is distributed to
bookstore
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the bookstore
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.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words book with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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