The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

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The table provides information on the number of individuals from 5 European countries living in each other's country in 2011.

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, we observe that Polish has the highest number of residents who were natives of the other four nations.

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, the public from

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state who had immigrated was lowest, in 2011.

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, the immigration of the Italy people has been at the top. In the case of Germany and the United Kingdom experienced almost a similar trend. On closer examination, it was observed that exactly 1,168,000 people had resided in Poland.

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, only 6,000 Polih's citizens had moved out to settle in another country. In Italy, nearly 863,670 Italians had shifted to a different part of Europe. But

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, there was an influx of 196,000 people in Italy itself.

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, approximately 1,198,000 individuals had come to Germany to settle, and roughly 530,000 of the Germans decided to leave the place. A similar case was witnessed in Britain.

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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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