The diagram shows the life cycle of a honey bee.

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The chart illustrates the life cycle of a
honey
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bee
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.
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, it can be seen from the diagram the
honey
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bee
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’s life cycle undergoes six different stages starting from laying the eggs until becoming an adult
bee
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,
this
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process takes nearly more than a month. It is conspicuous that the first stage where a matured
honey
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bee
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lays one or two eggs every three
days
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and
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the eggs take 240 hours to hatch. In the next five
days
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, these small
bee
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’s children have no ferns until they reach the next seven
days
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.
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, in the next seven
days
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, the size of the
bee
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started to increase and the fern started to grow in the next nine
days
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, it became three times bigger size from its original size and is called a nymph. Probing ahead, after completing nine
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, the nymph transformed into a young adult.
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, the young adult becomes a mature
honey
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bee
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in the next four
days
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and after that, the cycle starts again and again.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, bee, days with synonyms.
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