The diagram shows the life cycle of a honey bee.

The chart illustrates the life cycle of a
honey
bee
.
Overall
, it can be seen from the diagram the
honey
bee
’s life cycle undergoes six different stages starting from laying the eggs until becoming an adult
bee
,
this
process takes nearly more than a month. It is conspicuous that the first stage where a matured
honey
bee
lays one or two eggs every three
days
and
then
the eggs take 240 hours to hatch. In the next five
days
, these small
bee
’s children have no ferns until they reach the next seven
days
.
Additionally
, in the next seven
days
, the size of the
bee
started to increase and the fern started to grow in the next nine
days
, it became three times bigger size from its original size and is called a nymph. Probing ahead, after completing nine
days
, the nymph transformed into a young adult.
Furthermore
, the young adult becomes a mature
honey
bee
in the next four
days
and after that, the cycle starts again and again.
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